chicafrom3: photo of the TARDIS (xkcd - plead the third)
[personal profile] chicafrom3
So is everybody reading this week's xkcd series? Because if not you should be. Because it's AWESOME.

More to the point, does anybody know if Nathan Fillion is reading it? I know somebody on the RSS feed claimed to have tweeted him a link, but I don't know if he actually saw said link or is reading it. If not he should be.

Also, "no, that's the opposite of true" and "things are rarely just crazy enough to work, but they're frequently just crazy enough to fail hilariously" are awesome lines and I'm going to be stealing borrowing at least the first for my Better Than It Sounds 'verse because it's exactly the sort of thing Liam would say to Kyle.

Speaking of.

The Better Than It Sounds 'verse is the one featuring the geek rock band A Good Name For A Rock Band, by the way. I don't know if anybody remembers me mentioning them. Probably not. But it's one of my original-fiction 'verses.

Anyway, the Better Than It Sounds 'verse only recently received its formal name (previously I was calling it "the 'verse with Liam and Michael and them" and "the geek rock band 'verse" and the like). I've been nesting hardcore in TVTropes for the past couple days, worldbuilding like mad. Those two things aren't as unrelated as you might think, said geek rock band is in fact a TVTropes tribute band -- they named themselves, their albums, and their songs after various tropes -- and their view of things bleeds over into the 'verse at large. The end result is that I have an Excel workbook where I'm trying desperately to keep track of the rapidly-expanding cast, the band's discography, and associated tropes. I've been writing liner notes for their albums, piecing together running gags various characters are fond of, reworking relationships as necessary. I've gotten annoyed when characters from other 'verses bleed over and make me think that said 'verses are related. (Tasha, honey, I love you, but stay in your own universe, please?) I've planned out backstories. I've been sorting out A plots and B plots and C plots and plots that just don't make the cut.

I haven't actually written any of the actual story.

(This is not strictly true. I've written fragments of the story from back when it was entirely different story. Back when the band was named something else, Liam's nakama was blood family he didn't particularly like rather than the friends he was closer to than his real blood family, and Michael was an entirely different character in both personality and backstory. I don't think that counts, I had to throw it all out anyway.)

I mean, yes, okay, worldbuilding is important. But so is the actual text, isn't it?

This isn't the first time I've done something like this -- the last novel-length original fiction I planned out, I have ridiculous amounts of notes on the worldbuilding stuff and about three pages of actual written story. It's not even just original fiction; one of the reasons I've yet to finish The Trial Of Brendan Lahey is because every time I sit down to write more of it I get distracted by worldbuilding stuff that won't actually affect anything in the story itself, and if anybody remembers that Newsies cyberpunk AU I was talking about a long while ago, well, I've got about twenty pages of notes on characters, settings, technology, and plotting, and a handful of fragments of the actual story. I still know exactly how I wanted that Hamlet adaptation to play out, but actually writing it just hasn't happened.

This is a distressing pattern.

The easy thing to do would be to chalk this up to a lack of proper motivation or just call myself lazy and deal with it. Then there's the fact that I'm really not any good at all at braining proper plot (case in point: I know that a subplot of the BTIS 'verse is Conor and Tess and the transition from 'just friends' to 'victorious childhood friend'. How exactly that transition happens? ...you got me.) All of these are true but also excuses.

The fact is, worldbuilding is fun for me. I like developing a fictional universe to the point where I genuinely feel like I know the characters and the world and all the little details that nobody but me cares about.

Writing is also fun, obviously, or I wouldn't do it. Nobody's paying me for this. But it's also work; it's struggling through the parts that don't particularly interest me to get to the parts that do, it's finding a way to cover that particular plot hole, it's trying to keep everybody in character. And I get bored and wander off to write part of a different project, always intending to come back and pick up where I left off, but new projects are shinier and more fun, and it's a vicious cycle, basically. Short fics, the kind of stuff that's pretty much tailored for my attention span, are more my speed.

Which doesn't work so well when it comes to writing original fic. Fanfic, a ton of the worldbuilding's been done already. Your readers are coming at it with an understanding of the background, of who the characters are and what they're doing there. Original fic requires that worldbuilding be done in-text, if you want any of your readers to care about your characters at all. I could write a vignette where Conor and Tess are just being cute at each other, but nobody but me would understand who they are or why this moment is significant, and nobody but me would care.

And that's okay. Sometimes I do that. I have a handful of short stories that I've written and have no intention of showing to anyone else because all the worldbuilding is in my head. They're just to make me happy, and they do, and that's okay. But for fiction I intend to share with other people? Even theoretically? My style doesn't work so well.

(At least not for the big 'verses like this one. I have in fact written short stories with all the necessary worldbuilding contained within, but those are not the sort I'm talking about; those tend to have a narrower scope, a more specific purpose, and less heavy backstory.)

I lost the thread of what I'm trying to get at. This is the problem with thinking in tangents, you don't always remember where you were originally headed.

Um.

To sum up, worldbuilding is fun and necessary and generally a good thing, but I do it at the expense of actual writing, which is a problem that I don't know how to fix.
Date: 2009-05-14 06:01 am (UTC)

From: [identity profile] riviyan-questa.livejournal.com
Doctor Who works. It's something the author shouldn't have any trouble writing about, in any case.

I'm very glad to hear you think Dmitri sounds adorable. He is pretty adorable. Even when he makes Bad Decisions.
Date: 2009-05-15 03:56 pm (UTC)

From: [identity profile] chicafrom3.livejournal.com
Yesterday I wrote a DW argument for the boys that I was very fond of and that got me to the point I needed to get to. Today I realized I'm going to have to throw it out and start over because it doesn't work, dating-wise. This is the problem of having a story so firmly rooted in geek culture, there are time periods to match up within days.

Bad Decisions might make him more adorable. Rooting for the underdog and so on.
Date: 2009-05-16 02:32 pm (UTC)

From: [identity profile] riviyan-questa.livejournal.com
Maybe you could save the original argument and use it later, when it fits into the time line?

Yeah, Dmitri is pretty adorable when he fucks up. Of course, Fionn is pretty adorable, too. I don't to see him get hurt, which might happen if he pursues a relationship with Dmitri.
Date: 2009-05-16 05:47 pm (UTC)

From: [identity profile] chicafrom3.livejournal.com
I've got it c&p'd to a .txt file for bits and pieces. Will see if I can salvage it later. A flashback or something, maybe. Dunno.

I don't to see him get hurt,

This is one of the hard parts of writing, isn't it? Drama generally involves hurting your characters to some degree or other, but sometimes you just get so attached you don't want to see them get hurt.
Date: 2009-05-19 05:59 am (UTC)

From: [identity profile] riviyan-questa.livejournal.com
Well and Fionn is such a sweetie... Mason was always a bit of an asshole, right from the start, that made it easier. Cuz Dmitri can be a bit of one too. So it worked and I could play them off each other. But Fionn is just... nice. *sigh* I don't want him to get caught in Dmitri's cycle of drama. And I know they don't end up together for long, anyway, cuz Dmitri ends up with a gallery owner named Mike. I wrote a story about that. It's a depressing story. I'll post it for you. It's kind of old, but I don't think you've read it.
Date: 2009-05-19 05:07 pm (UTC)

From: [identity profile] chicafrom3.livejournal.com
But Fionn is just... nice.

Hardest characters to write about. Or maybe that's just me. But it's a combination of not wanting to drag them down into the drama they're better than, and the fact that they just don't tend to generate drama of their own.

If that makes sense at all.
Date: 2009-05-19 06:38 pm (UTC)

From: [identity profile] riviyan-questa.livejournal.com
Yeah he is pretty hard to write about. And I think you're dead on with the reasons why. Honestly, I want to write more about his brother, Declan. Who is also a pretty nice guy, but I dunno. Maybe he's more developed? Dmitri wrote about him and Fionn in his blog this past week.
Date: 2009-05-19 07:13 pm (UTC)

From: [identity profile] chicafrom3.livejournal.com
That's a very familiar feeling, I experience it all the time. Conor/Tess was not supposed to be a major subplot (or even a real plot at all) originally, y'know? Characters have their own minds, it's bizarre.
Date: 2009-05-20 07:46 am (UTC)

From: [identity profile] riviyan-questa.livejournal.com
They really do have their own minds. It's nice having people who understand and don't think I'm crazy! Haha

Declan himself isn't really creating any drama; it's all in Shannon's head. It could be interesting to write about their neighbour-y relationship. Hm. Maybe that's what I'll do for my story!

Profile

chicafrom3: photo of the TARDIS (Default)
chicafrom3

December 2023

S M T W T F S
     1 2
345678 9
10111213141516
17181920212223
24 252627282930
31      

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jun. 14th, 2025 05:27 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios